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[I-D]=20 draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt

[Qver]=20 draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding-05.txt

[Shep] Dan=20 Romascanu

1.a) Yes, the WG Chair has reviewed this = version of=20 the document.

1.b) Yes it has had adequate = reviews from WG members and members of the IEEE = 802.3 Working=20 Groups; no concerns about the=20 reviews

1.c) No special concerns, a MIB Doctor = review would=20 be helpful.

1.d) No special=20 concerns

1.e) The=20 hubmib Working group had a low numbers particpation. The document was = reviewed=20 and discussed, including in two WG Last Call sessions. It represents the = strong=20 consensus of the current active participants in the work.=20

1.f) No appeals have been = threatened.

1.g) Yes, there are some minor = nits and boilerplate problems that will be=20 fixed

before RFC publication.

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tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(305): Line has weird spacing: =
'...uration    dot...'
tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(306): Line has weird spacing: =
'...uration   dot3...'
tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(340): Line has weird spacing: =
'...cificTx   dot3...'
tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(341): Line has weird spacing: =
'...cificRx   dot3...'
tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(343): Line has weird spacing: =
'...dConfig  dot3O...'
tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(346): Line has weird spacing: =
'...odEvent   dot3...'
tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(354): Line has weird spacing: =
'...odEvent  dot3O...'
tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(362): Line has weird spacing: =
'...odEvent  dot3O...'
tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(2938): Line contains a non-ascii =
character (=FB) in position 71.
tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(2945): Line contains a non-ascii =
character (=FB) in position 39.
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    Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate...
  * The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.1 IPR Disclosure
    Acknowledgement.=20

  (Expected a match on the following text:
    "By submitting this Internet-Draft, each author represents that any
    applicable patent or other IPR claims of which he or she is aware
    have been or will be disclosed, and any of which he or she becomes
    aware will be disclosed, in accordance with Section 6 of BCP 79.")

  * The document seems to lack an RFC 3979 Section 5, para 1 IPR =
Disclosure
    Acknowledgement -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching =
beginning.
    Boilerplate error?

  (Expected a match on the following text:
    "The IETF takes no position regarding the validity or scope of any
    Intellectual Property Rights or other rights that might be claimed =
to
    pertain to the implementation or use of the technology described in
    this document or the extent to which any license under such rights
    might or might not be available; nor does it represent that it has
    made any independent effort to identify any such rights.  =
Information
    on the procedures with respect to rights in RFC documents can be
    found in BCP 78 and BCP 79."
 =20
   ... but found this:
    "The IETF takes no position regarding the validity or scope of any
    Intellectual Property Rights or other rights that might be claimed =
to
    pertain to the implementation or use of the technology described in
    this document or the extent to which any license under such rights
    might or might not be available; nor does it represent that it has
    made any independent effort to identify any such rights.  =
Information
    EFM OAM MIB                March 2005")
...^


  * The document seems to lack an RFC 3979 Section 5, para 3 IPR =
Disclosure
    Invitation -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching =
beginning.
    Boilerplate error?

  (Expected a match on the following text:
    "The IETF invites any interested party to bring to its attention any
    copyrights, patents or patent applications, or other proprietary
    rights that may cover technology that may be required to implement
    this standard.  Please address the information to the IETF at
    ietf-ipr@ietf.org."
 =20
   ... but found this:
    "The IETF invites any interested party to bring to its attention any
    copyrights, patents or patent applications, or other proprietary
    rights that may cover technology that may be required to implement
    this standard.  Please address the information to the IETF at ietf
.................................................................^
    ipr@ietf.org.")



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http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:
  * The document seems to lack a 1id_guidelines paragraph about
    Internet-Drafts being working documents -- however, there's a =
paragraph with
    a matching beginning. Boilerplate error?

  (Expected a match on the following text:
    "Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering
    Task Force (IETF), its areas, and its working groups.  Note that
    other groups may also distribute working documents as =
Internet-Drafts."
 =20
   ... but found this:
    "Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering
    Task Force (IETF), its areas, and its working groups.  Note that
    other groups may also distribute working documents as Internet =
Drafts.")
.................................................................^


  - It seems as if not all pages are separated by form feeds - found 54
    form feeds but 56 pages

  Miscellaneous warnings:
    None.

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1.h) Yes, references are = split.

No, there are no references to unpublished=20 documents,

1.j) I-D Submission Summary

Technical Summary

This document defines objects for = managing=20 Operations,
Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) capabilities = on=20 Ethernet like
interfaces conformant to the Ethernet OAM = functionality=20 defined in
[802.3ah]. The Ethernet OAM = functionality is=20 complementary to SNMP
management in that it is focused on a = small set=20 of link-specific
functions for directly connected Ethernet=20 interfaces. This document
defines objects for = controlling those=20 link OAM functions, and on
providing mechanisms to take status = and=20 input from Ethernet OAM and
feed it into a larger TCP/IP = network=20 management system.

Working = Group=20 Summary

There is = consensus in=20 the WG to recommend this document as a Proposed = Standard

Protocol Quality

This document was reviewed by Dan Romascanu, CM Heard, Lior Khermosh and = Edward Beili=20 and found to be at the appropriate level for submission to the IESG.=20

idnits 1.77=20 tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt: tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(305): Line has weird spacing: = '...uration dot...' tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(306): Line has weird spacing: = '...uration dot3...' tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(340): Line has weird spacing: = '...cificTx dot3...' tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(341): Line has weird spacing: = '...cificRx dot3...' tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(343): Line has weird spacing: = '...dConfig dot3O...' tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(346): Line has weird spacing: = '...odEvent dot3...' tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(354): Line has weird spacing: = '...odEvent dot3O...' tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(362): Line has weird spacing: = '...odEvent dot3O...' tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(2938): Line contains a non-ascii = character (=FB) in position 71. tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(2945): Line contains a non-ascii = character (=FB) in position 39. tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib-03.txt(2949): Line contains a non-ascii = character (=FB) in position 51. Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html: Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate... * The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.1 IPR Disclosure Acknowledgement.=20 (Expected a match on the following text: "By submitting this Internet-Draft, each author represents that any applicable patent or other IPR claims of which he or she is aware have been or will be disclosed, and any of which he or she becomes aware will be disclosed, in accordance with Section 6 of BCP 79.") * The document seems to lack an RFC 3979 Section 5, para 1 IPR = Disclosure Acknowledgement -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching = beginning. Boilerplate error? (Expected a match on the following text: "The IETF takes no position regarding the validity or scope of any Intellectual Property Rights or other rights that might be claimed = to pertain to the implementation or use of the technology described in this document or the extent to which any license under such rights might or might not be available; nor does it represent that it has made any independent effort to identify any such rights. = Information on the procedures with respect to rights in RFC documents can be found in BCP 78 and BCP 79." =20 ... but found this: "The IETF takes no position regarding the validity or scope of any Intellectual Property Rights or other rights that might be claimed = to pertain to the implementation or use of the technology described in this document or the extent to which any license under such rights might or might not be available; nor does it represent that it has made any independent effort to identify any such rights. = Information EFM OAM MIB March 2005") ...^ * The document seems to lack an RFC 3979 Section 5, para 3 IPR = Disclosure Invitation -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching = beginning. Boilerplate error? (Expected a match on the following text: "The IETF invites any interested party to bring to its attention any copyrights, patents or patent applications, or other proprietary rights that may cover technology that may be required to implement this standard. Please address the information to the IETF at ietf-ipr@ietf.org." =20 ... but found this: "The IETF invites any interested party to bring to its attention any copyrights, patents or patent applications, or other proprietary rights that may cover technology that may be required to implement this standard. Please address the information to the IETF at ietf .................................................................^ ipr@ietf.org.") Checking nits according to = http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt: * The document seems to lack a 1id_guidelines paragraph about Internet-Drafts being working documents -- however, there's a = paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error? (Expected a match on the following text: "Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF), its areas, and its working groups. Note that other groups may also distribute working documents as = Internet-Drafts." =20 ... but found this: "Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF), its areas, and its working groups. Note that other groups may also distribute working documents as Internet = Drafts.") .................................................................^ - It seems as if not all pages are separated by form feeds - found 54 form feeds but 56 pages Miscellaneous warnings: None.

idnits 1.77=20 tmp/draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-epon-mib-03.txt: Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html: Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate... * The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.1 IPR Disclosure Acknowledgement.=20 (Expected a match on the following text: "By submitting this Internet-Draft, each author represents that any applicable patent or other IPR claims of which he or she is aware have been or will be disclosed, and any of which he or she becomes aware will be disclosed, in accordance with Section 6 of BCP 79.") (The document uses RFC 3667 boilerplate or RFC 3978-like boilerplate instead of verbatim RFC 3978 boilerplate. After 6 May 2005, = submission of drafts without verbatim RFC 3978 boilerplate is not accepted.) Checking nits according to = http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt: Nothing found here (but these checks do not cover all of 1id-guidelines.txt yet). Miscellaneous warnings: None.