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Document: draft-farrell-tls-pemesni-11
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2025-12-30
IETF LC End Date: 2026-01-01
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

- The phrase "as an ECHConfigList containing an ECHConfig that matches the private key"  of the following sentence is hard to parse: 
"The file
contains the concatenation of the PEM encoding of the private key (if
present) followed by the PEM encoding of the public key as an
ECHConfigList containing an ECHConfig that matches the private key"


Do you mean "contains a PEM-encoded ECHConfigList whose embedded public key corresponds to that private key"?

- PEM ECH file” vs “ECHConfig PEM file: are they the same? 

Nits/editorial comments:

Typo: 
“mechanims” -> “mechanisms” in Security Considerations. 
“clarificatrion” -> “clarification” in Appendix A. 


Warm Regards, 
Linda Dunbar