Document: draft-hardaker-dns-wgs-at-ietf Title: Community considerations on DNS WG structures at IETF Reviewer: David Lou Review result: Ready with Nits This is an IETF process document, not a technical document. So the comments here are more focused on the text itself. Major issues: None Minor issues: It could be my personal opinion instead of a minor issue. But I put it here anyway for discussion/consideration. In the "Recommendations" chapter, it is recommended to create 3 new WGs, where I wonder whether it is really necessary to create a DNSDISPATCH WG, for the following reasons: - The Findings in chapter 2 shows the community has consensus on create 2 WGs instead of 3. Regarding the dispatch work, it states that "A separated DNSDISPATCH mechanism would be beneficial...". - The text gives audiences the impression that a new WG is not really required. For instance, "this WG should conduct its work almost entirely over a mailing list...", "Ideally, in-person meetings should be rare.", "A significant portion of submissions to DNSDISPTACH can likely be handled quickly and efficiently". - In each Area, there is already a WG (e.g. the INTAREA WG) acting primarily as a forum for discussing a wide spectrum of topics that affect the entire area, and taking partially the responsibility to "dispatch" a topic to the right WG in case of ambiguity. - On top of that, there is a DNS Directorate in the Ops Area, which can help dispatch DNS-related topics as well. Some nits: 1. P2, Table of Contents, "1.2 Requirements language" -> "1.2 Requirements Language"; "Orginal project announcement" - > "Orginal Project Announcement" 2. P3, "The team uses a few new WG names below, but recognize both... " -> "but recognizes both... " 3. P4, "used to stress importance of some recommendations" -> "used to stress the importance of some recommendations" 4. P6, "each WG will need to make their own decision on this matter" -> "to make its own decision on this matter" 5. P7, "submissions to DNSDISPTACH can likely" -> "submissions to DNSDISPATCH can likely" 6. P9, "WG chairs, AD, ISE, etc" -> "WG chairs, AD, ISE, etc.,"