I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other comments. Sorry this review is so late. The summary of the review is Ready with a minor issue. Security: I have no objection to anything in the Security Considerations section. However, I find it odd that this section does not mention confidentiality or authentication at all. I think it needs a few words added. Perhaps, in the first paragraph of the Security Considerations section, the following change, assuming it is correct: "The security considrations of the specifications continue to apply in the MSF scope." -> "Confidentiality and authentication of MSF control and data traffic is provided by these specifications whose security considerations continue to apply to MSF." Nits: Section 2, top of page 5: garble. ",wh ile" -> ", while". Section 3, page 6: - "the AutoTxCell and AutoRxCell are collided" -> "the AutoTxCell and AutoRxCell collide" - "In case in a backs-off period" -> "When in a back-off period" - "autonomous cells take precedence over negotiated cell" -> "autonomous cells take precedence over negotiated cells" - "possible for negotiated cell" -> "possible for a negotiated cell" Section 5, page 9: "Without specific declaring, all cells" -> "Without specific declaration, all cells" or just "All cells" Section 5.1, page 9: ", most cases" -> ", in most cases" Section 5.2, top of page 11: - "For burst traffic type" -> "For bursty traffic" - "It is recommended to set MAX_NUM_CELLS value at least 4x of the maximum number of used cells in a slot frame in recent history." -> "Setting MAC_NUM_CELLS to a value at least 4x the recent maximum number of cells used in a slot frame is RECOMMENDED." There are references to outdated drafts. I usually just omit the version number in my drafts that reference other drafts eliminating this. Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA d3e3e3@gmail.com