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Document: draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-??
Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review Date: 2024-06-25
IETF LC End Date: 2024-06-25
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: I found no major issues with the draft as it's written. Its specifications are concise and clear. I have only suggested adding one sentence to the privacy considerations section as a minor issue.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: The privacy considerations section might include the following sentence, to parallel the security considerations section and present a reasonable risk to implementers of this specification, "A single or systematic retrieval of delegated credentials and associated private keys would allow the attacker to decrypt any data sent by the end user intended for the end service, which may include PII."

Nits/editorial comments: None.