I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-15 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2021-03-20 IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-17 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This seems like a straightforward encoding specification draft. While I did not check to see that the example encodings were correct, they appeared logical to the eye. Really, the only thing I have to offer is a small set of nits that mildly improve the readability of the document. [Ready with nits] Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: General: Ensure that “i.e.” is followed by a comma. Specific: Page 4, “child” term: insert “or” before “an action output”. Page 4, “item” term: append a comma after submodule. Page 5, section 3, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after “input”. Change the first “and” to “or” (before “action output”). Page 5, section 3, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: consider inserting “a” before “SID”. Append a comma after “nodes”. Change the “and” to “or”. Page 5, section 3, 5th paragraph, 1st sentence: change “and” to “or”. Page 5, section 3, 6th paragraph, 1st sentence: change the first “node” to “nodes”. Append a comma after “name”. Page 8, section 3.2, 6th bullet item: append a comma after “submodules”. Page 8, section 3.3, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: change “string” to “strings”. Change “as” after “similar” to “to”. Page 8, section 3.3, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “to SIDs” to “with SID”. Page 11, section 4.2, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: consider aligning the capitalization and pluralization of terms in this sentence with the usage in the Abstract. Append a comma after “inputs” (or “input” if you change this sentence to match the Abstract). Page 22, 1st paragraph following the bullet items, 2nd sentence: change comma after to either a period or a semicolon. Page 26, section 5.1, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change the comma to a semicolon. Insert “to” before “the CBOR”. Page 27, section 5.2, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change the comma to a semicolon. Insert “to” before “the CBOR”. Page 29, 1st paragraph: change “a” before “’mtu’” to “an”. Page 35, section 6.10: delete the comma after “identityref”. Insert “as” before both “a YANG Schema” and “a name”. Page 35, section 6.10.1, 2nd sentence: consider changing “as” to “used for”. Page 36, section 6.11, 2nd paragraph: change “a” to “an” before “’is-router’”. Page 37, section 6.12, 2nd paragraph following the bullet items: insert “a” before “CBOR”. Page 39, 3rd paragraph: would it make more sense to change “Schema nodes member” to “Schema node members”? Page 39, 2nd bullet item, 2nd sentence: insert “the” before “top”. Change “follow” to “followed”. Page 41, section 6.13.2, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: I believe “analogous” makes more sense than “analogical” in this sentence: Page 43, section 8, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “of” to “to”.