Hello,

I have been selected as the Operations Directorate (opsdir) reviewer for this draft.
The Operations Directorate reviews all operational and management-related drafts to ensure alignment with operational best practices.
More "Guidelines for Considering Operations and Management in IETF Specifications" can be found at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-opsarea-rfc5706bis/.
While these comments are primarily for the OPS ADs, the authors should consider them alongside other feedback and address them through updates or discussions.

Document: draft-ietf-detnet-controller-plane-framework-12
Reviewer: Samier Barguil
Review Date: 2025-07-07
IETF LC End Date: 2025-07-15
Intended Status: Informational

Summary:

Minor concerns/nits that should be resolved before publication.

This document It is intended to provide a framework overview for the DetNet controller plane, discussing concepts and requirements that could form the basis for future solution specifications. The authors did a great work identifying key requirements and architectural models, while clearly stating that detailed protocol solutions and necessary extensions are subjects for future work


Nits: 

In Section 3.1, "Distributed Control Plane and Signaling Protocols"

r/ RSVT-TE / RSVP-TE

In Section 6, "Multidomain Aspects"

I suggest to replace as "multi-domain" (with a hyphen) or "multi domain" (as two words).

In Section 5.2.1.2, "Passive PM"

r / affect / effect