I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live-03 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2018-10-08 IETF LC End Date: NA IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-12 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental Track RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 5], "accessable"--->"accessible" -[Page 5], "providing a"---->"providing an" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com