I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-l2tpext-sbfd-discriminator-05.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2016/04/27 IETF LC End Date: 2016/04/05 IESG Telechat date: 2016/05/05 Summary: Ready. Thanks for fixing the nits and issue from my last call review. NOTE: I noted that the related document, draft-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-04 that is also on the telechat agenda, provides for the transmission of multiple discriminators in the same way as this document does for l2tp. The words in the OSPF version match as far as declaring decisions as to what multiple discriminators are used for to be out of scope. However, unlike the l2tp document, the ospf document does not indicate what the discriminator is intended to be associated with if there is only one. It would be desirable to make the documents consistent. This note also applies to draft-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator-02 which is already in the RFC Editor queue. The out of scope comment and indication of what a single discriminator would be used for also needs to be added to draft-zhuang-idr-bgp-ls-sbfd-extensions which is still in progress.