I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-acceptown-community-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150206 IETF LC End Date: 20141208 IESG Telechat date: 20150205 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1: VRF and PE are not well known abbrevs (cf http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt ) - Abstract page 1 (style): I suggest: that is distributed by the route reflector -> that the route reflector distributes - Abstract page 1 (style): on the same PE as -> on the same PE than - Abstract page 1 (style): (second) allowing the technique to be used -> and to be used - 1 page 2: same comment about "that is distributed" - 1 page 3: the abbrev PE (Provider Edge) must be introduced at its first use (in the body of the document). - 3 page 4: i.e. -> i.e., Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr