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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc8708bis-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2024-08-09
IETF LC End Date: 2024-08-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document discusses the motivation for using HSS/LMS, which is its post-quantum security, and highlights the changes made since the previous version (RFC 8708).

Major issues: None.

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 1.4 describes the change regarding the KEY field in the pk-HSS-LMS-HashSig definition to reflect "no ASN.1 wrapping for the public key".
I am not an expert in this domain, but would like to know what are the reasons behind removing the ASN.1 wrapping?
Does RFC8708 imply ASN.1 wrapping? 

Thank you, 
Linda Dunbar