Reviewer: Tim Wicinski Review Result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-geo-12 Reviewer: Tim Wicinski Intended Status: Experimental In the IANA Considerations, the second paragrapgh in this section should be moved after the table. For example: Following the guidelines of [RFC8126], IANA is asked to assign a value (17 is suggested) for the Geo-Coordinates LCAF from the "LISP Canonical Address Format (LCAF) Types" registry (defined in [RFC8060] as follows: +=========+=====================+============================+ | Value # | LISP LCAF Type Name | Reference | +=========+=====================+============================+ | 17 | Geo-Location | [This Document], Section 5 | +---------+---------------------+----------------------------+ Table 1: Geo-Location LCAF Type Assignment This document updates the format of LCAF Type value 5 in [RFC8060], IANA is asked to mark type value 5 as "Deprecated". -- RFC8060 doesn't really mention how to deal with deprecated entries to the registry, I suggest some slight changes to the text here.