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Document: draft-ietf-mboned-redundant-ingress-failover-07
Reviewer: Yingzhen Qu
Review Date: 06-August-2025
Intended Status: Informational

Summary:
This document analyzes the redundant ingress-router failover problem within a multicast domain.


Comments:
The draft needs some editorial work.

Take the abstract as an example. The current one doesn't read one, please consider the following suggestion:
This document analyzes the problem of failover between redundant ingress routers in multicast domains. It describes cold, warm, and hot standby modes, detailing their advantages, limitations, and deployment considerations to help operators select appropriate mechanisms.

Some sentences are too long and hard to read, for example:
"
The redundant ingress routers may be deployed to forward the same multicast flow with only one router active at a time while the others act as backups.
"

Terminology:
121      IR: The ingress router for multicast flows in a multicast domain.
Instead of "The ingress router", I think this should be "An ingress router", considering there might be multiple ingress routers.

123      ER: The egress router for multicast flows in a multicast domain.
should be "An egress router".

125      SIR: The IR responsible for sending the multicast flow, or the IR
126      whose flow is received by the ER, is called Selected-IR, or SIR for
127      short.
Can you pleas clarify that instead of "or the IR whose flow is received by the ER", should this be "and ...."
Suggested text:
The IR that actively sends the multicast flow, whose traffic is received by the egress router, is referred as the Selected-IR, or SIR for short.

"failover" and "switchover " seems to be interchangeable, please clarify.

For the different backup modes:
Cold Standby section could mention implications for control-plane churn (e.g., slow convergence due to PIM Join/Prune updates).
Warm Standby could elaborate on synchronization mechanisms between routers (state sync, sequence numbers, or shared RPF logic).
Hot Standby: The trade-off between duplicate traffic and fast failover is good, but might benefit from a clear reference to seamless protection mechanisms like BFD-assisted PIM or BI-DIR multicast.
Adding some examples may help.

A session about deployment consideration will be helpful. Especially for multi-domain scenarios, how this failover will behave across AS boundaries?

Section 3.2, about the failure detection, more details and comparisons should should be provided.

The table in section 4.4 can add more content about comparisons of different failover modes, such as failover time, control plane load, typical use cases etc.