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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-fwk-??
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review Date: 2024-11-11
IETF LC End Date: 2024-11-11
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Document is ready and I do not have any major issues with it. It was even readable for someone not too familiar with MNA before starting to read the document (and the associated requirements RFC).

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments: What I would like to see as a non-MNA person are few illustrations of label stack how different elaborated aproaches would look like. Those would make the document a lot more readable/informational.