Status: ready with NITS
Summary: Nicely written, the comment on the IANA format is NITS, but it needs to be fixed. 


Cheerily, Sue Hares


1. IANA NITS
IANA require the form "Registry" in "Group". 

In section 4.1, the text does not specify the group of registries that 
MPLS actionm Parameters regsitry belongs to. 

Old text:
   This document requests that IANA allocate a codepoint (TBA1) from the
   "Multiprotocol Label Switching Architecture (MPLS)"/"MPLS Network
   Actions Parameters"/"Network Action Opcodes" registry for the 13-bit
   NRP Selector Action./

In Section 4.2, the text does not specify the group of registries for 
the MPLS Network Actions Parameters/Network Action Opcodes registry./ 

Old text:/ 
   This document requests that IANA allocate a codepoint (TBA2) from the
   "Multiprotocol Label Switching Architecture (MPLS)"/"MPLS Network
   Actions Parameters"/"Network Action Opcodes" registry for the 20-bit
   NRP Selector Action. /

In section 4.3, similarly, the group of registries that 
"MPLS Network Actions Parameters"/"Network Action Opcodes" registry 
is from is missing. 

old text:/
   This document requests that IANA allocate a codepoint (TBA3) from the
   "Multiprotocol Label Switching Architecture (MPLS)"/"MPLS Network
   Actions Parameters"/"Network Action Opcodes" registry for the 20-bit
   Entropy and NRP Selector Action./  

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