- The definitions may not be sufficient for UDP multicast clients and servers. I am not sure whether anything needs to be said about this. - The udp-client description points to section 5 of RFC6724. I did not understand how this section relates to the text in the description. - The remote-address description says 'name resolution should happen on each connection attempt'. Given that UDP is connection-less, I am unsure what is meant with this. - There are unused references, like RFC 9110. I also wonder why the security template refers to QUIC RFC 9000 as a secure transport for NETCONF. I think NETCONF over QUIC is still in the making (and this document would once approve perhaps be a relevant reference, right now this makes no sense to me).