Editorial Typos: There are a few minor errors. For example, Section 4 spells “IANA regsitry” instead of “registry”. The Abstract has “Such a design enable” (should be enables). These should be corrected. Placeholder References: The YANG module import statements use placeholder “RFC YYYY” and “RFC ZZZZ” for upcoming documents. These must be updated once the referenced drafts become RFCs. In particular, the ietf-subscribed-notif-receivers module import (to configure on publisher) cites an “HTTPS-based Transport” draft that should be finalized or dropped if obsolete. Segmentation Flag Semantics: The enable-segmentation leaf defaults to true (good), but its description warns that disabling it causes IP fragmentation. Given fragmentation is strongly discouraged (RFC 8085/8900), the text should more emphatically recommend not disabling segmentation. The current wording (“large messages may be fragmented”) could be interpreted loosely; it might help to note this is generally unsafe.