I was assigned as ARTART reviewer for this draft. I'm not a Yang or network management expert. I have not reviewed Yang and XML code. I found no issue with this draft, apart from small nits/suggestions identified by <MB> below.

   Configuration in <system> is undeletable to clients (e.g., a list

<MB>s/is undeletable to/can not be deleted by/ ?</MB>
   entry can never be removed from <system> through protocol
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   ([RFC8808]).  If system initializes a value for a particular leaf

<MB>s/If system initializes/If the system initializes/ or If <system> initializes ?</MB>

   which is overridden by the client with a different value in <running>