OPSDIR Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ntp-over-ptp

Reviewer: Tony Li
Status: Ready

Disclaimer: I have been an NTP user since the 1980's, but am a novice
at PTP. I have reviewed the WG exchanges on this draft. I'm a Juniper
employee, but I have nothing to do with Juniper's implementation of
this draft.

Overall: I found this very straightforward and pretty well
written. There's a whole bunch of editorial issues, and I don't have
the energy to attack them all. I will let the RFC editor do their job.
From an operational perspective, this is an excellent idea which will
seem strange at first (don't cross the streams!), but ultimately makes
good sense. Assuming a sane configuration and reasonable debugging in
the endpoints, this should be straightforward to manage.

Details:

Section 1:

Paragraph 1:
s/supported/support/
s/processing/processing,/ (again in paragrph 3)
s/on accuracy/on the accuracy/

Paragraph 5:
s/transport/transports/