I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-nvo3-rfc7348bis-02 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2025-12-26 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft is a replacement for RFC 7348 that moves that document to the IETF stream from its previous Independent Submission. It creates an IANA registration request for the VXLAN Flags. There are several nits (mostly dating back to RFC 7348) that could also be fixed. [Ready with Nits] Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits: Page 1, Abstract, 1st sentence: change “documents” to “document”. Page 1, Abstract, 3rd sentence: change “RFC7348” to “RFC 7348”. (see RFC 7322, section 3.5). Add a comma after “7348”. Page 2, section 1, 1st sentence: change documents” to “document”. Page 3, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after “[RFC7348]”. Page 3, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: append a comma after “(VMs)”. Page 4, section 1.1: could these acronyms and definitions be done a single line as was done in RFC 7348? As it stands, the two-line format adds unnecessary length to the document. Page 5, VXLAN Gateway definition: if you want to retain the two-line format, then capitalize “an” in the definition. But, I would prefer that you go back to the one-line format. Page 5, section 3.1, 1st paragraph: The IEEE 802.1D reference (“[_02.1D]”) is really odd looking and doesn’t match the original reference in RFC 7348. Please change all of the IEEE 802.1 references back to having the 8 in them. Even RFC 7322 shows an example reference that looks like “[IEEE802.1Q]”. Page 6, section 3.2, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: append a comma after “on-demand”. Page 6, section 3.2, 2nd paragraph, 3rd sentence: there is an extraneous paragraph split here that should be removed. Page 11, Outer IP Header definition, 1st sentence: there is an extraneous paragraph split here that should be removed. Page 15, section 6, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: consider changing “on” to “in” twice in this sentence. I tend to think of servers as being in racks, not on them. Page 15, section, 2nd paragraph, last sentence: append a comma after “finally”. Page 18, Figure 4 caption: if possible, try to attach the caption to the figure in a non-breaking manner. In the text version of the document, it appears at the top of the page by itself. Page 18, section 7, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: fix the IEEE 802.1X reference. Page 19, section 8.2, 1st sentence: change “VxLAN” to “VXLAN” to match every other usage in this document.