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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-probstate-reqs-03
Management of Networks with Constrained Devices: Problem Statement and
                              Requirements
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 2-January-2014
IETF LC End Date: 14-January-2014
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:


    A loss rate of "10^-0" might be better written as "1".  And sounds 


like a failed link rather than a loss rate, even if the cause is 


interference.  (last paragraph of section 1.3)






    Section 3 states that requirements are uniquely identified by three 


digit numbers.  In fact, they are identified by a major section number 


and a three digit minor requirement ID number. (So there is a 1.001 and 


a 2.001).  So the description of the requirements template in the start 


of section 3 should be tuned to match what is being done.