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Document:                         


draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-sha-2-usm-snmp-05




 




Reviewer:                           Christer Holmberg




 




Review Date:                     11 April 2015




 




IETF LC End Date:             20 April 2015




 




IETF Telechat Date:         N/A




 




Summary:        The document is well written, and almost ready for publication. I do, however, have a couple of comments (see below).         





 




Major Issues: None




 




Minor Issues: 




 




Q1_10-1: In the IANA Considerations section, IANA is requested to register new values. However, it is not mentioned in which registry the new values will be registered.




 




 




 




Editorial nits: 




 




Q1_GENERAL-1:              Regarding reference, sometimes you say “RFC XXXX [RFCXXXX]”, sometimes “RFC XXXX” and sometimes “[RFCXXXX]”.




 




I think you should be consistent, and e.g. use “RFC XXXX [RFCXXXX]” on first occurrence, and then “RFC XXXX”.




 




In some cases “[RFCXXXX]” is ok, though, e.g. in section 9.4 where you say “

SNMP-USER-BASED-SM-MIB [RFC3414].”.