I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <​http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-04 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2016-04-18 IETF LC End Date: 2016-04-26 IESG Telechat date: 2016-05-05 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Two clarifications, one typo: 2.1: OLD Type - S-BFD Discriminator TLV Type NEW Type - S-BFD Discriminator TLV Type (TBD [to be filled in by IANA]) END OLD Length - Total length of the discriminator (Value field) in octets, not including the optional padding. The Length is a multiple of 4 octets, and consequently specifies how many Discriminators are included in the TLV. NEW Length - Total length of the discriminator(s) that appear in the Value field, in octets. Each discriminator is 4 octets, so the Length is 4 times the number of Discriminators included in the TLV. There is no optional padding for this field. END 2.2: OLD Note that the S-BFD session may be required to pan multiple areas NEW Note that the S-BFD session may be required to span multiple areas END -- Pete Resnick Qualcomm Technologies, Inc. - +1 (858)651-4478