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Document: draft-ietf-raw-technologies-??
Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review Date: 2024-10-07
IETF LC End Date: 2024-09-18
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is a very useful informational text about the requirements of reliability and availability for various uses in networks connected with wireless technologies.

Major issues: The introduction could make it clearer to the reader how the technologies were chosen, if it is a complete set at the time of writing, and other revisions that indicate more clearly the purpose. I also find the final paragraph of the introduction more helpful about the document's contents than the current abstract:
   This document browses the short and middle range radio technologies
   that are suitable to provide a DetNet/RAW service over, presents the
   characteristics that RAW may leverage, and explores the applicability
   of the technologies to carry deterministic flows. The studied
   technologies are Wi-Fi 6/7, TimeSlotted Channel Hopping (TSCH), 3GPP
   5G, and L-band Digital Aeronautical Communications System (LDACS).

Minor issues:

Other reviewers have also noted the slightly awkward "summary" subsection at the end of each section and my suggested approach might be to include this as the *first* paragraph for each section, before the subsections begin, eg:

4.  IEEE 802.11

[Summary paragraph without subsection heading]

4.1.  Provenance and Documents

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Nits/editorial comments: (none).