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Document: draft-ietf-regext-epp-delete-bcp-08
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2024-12-02
IETF LC End Date: 2024-11-28
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat


Summary: The document thoroughly explores the impacts of deletion practices and the unintended consequences for DNS resolution. 

Major issues:

Minor issues: The document highlights multiple renaming approaches but does not always clarify the scenarios where these approaches are most suitable. For example, in Section 5.1.3.4 ("Renaming to Sacrificial Name Server Host Objects Maintained by the Client"), it mentions that clients "MAY" rename to sacrificial hosts, but the risks of domain hijacks are still substantial without strict maintenance.

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 4 (Page 6): Do you mean "ns1.domain2.example" in the following sentence? 
"Host object "ns1.domain1.example" is associated with domain object
"domain2.example" by ClientY."

Best Regards, 
Linda Dunbar