Hi, I have been selected as the DNS Directorate reviewer for this draft. The DNS Directorate seeks to review all DNS or DNS-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the ADs. For more information about the DNS Directorate, please see https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/dnsdir I previously reviewed version 09 of this draft and at that time stated that it was "Ready with Nits" This review focuses on changes since that version as well as my original review commentary. I believe this document now has the status: Ready My Nits and clarifications have been addressed in full and all the other changes made between versions 09 and 17 do not give me new reasons to nit pick and otherwise provide greater clarity on an already well written document Thanks for your hard work on this draft Best Regards Anthony