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Document: draft-ietf-rift-yang-14

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2024-06-24
IETF LC End Date: 2024-06-21
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document defines the YANG data model for RIFT

issues:
- The definition of "PoD" in the document differs from its common usage in the industry. Typically, a PoD represents a self-contained, modular unit that includes all necessary components such as compute, storage, and networking resources.

- The document has two sections labeled "Terminology" (Sections 1.1 and 1.3). Consolidating these into a single section would improve clarity and reduce redundancy.

- Need to add references to Clos, ThreeWay Adjacencies,  and Fat Trees. 

Thanks, Linda Dunbar