Hi all,

Thanks the authors for the document. I'm the assigned OPSDIR reviewer of this document. I think there are some editorial nits can be improved.

Summary:
This document describes cursor-based pagination extensions to the SCIM (System for Cross-Domain Identity Management) protocol.

Major Issues:
None

Minor Issues:
None

Nits:
1.Section 2.1: Cursor Expiration Consistency (Section 2.1 vs. Section 4)
• Issue: Table 3 uses a fixed 600-second example for expiredCursor while Section 4 defines configurable cursorTimeout.
• Recommendation: Revise the Table 3 description to:
 "Do not wait longer than the service provider's configured cursorTimeout value to request additional pages."

2.Section 2.1: InvalidCount Error Consistency as the previous one
• Recommendation: Revise the Table 3 description to:
 "Count value must be between 1 and the service provider's configured maxPageSize."

3.Section 4: Missing Pagination Attribute Definition
The document appears to lack a formal definition for the pagination complex attribute.
• Recommendation: Add JSON schema definitions for the pagination attribute structure.

4.Section 5: Security Considerations: No explicit reference to RFC 7644 Section 7 security framework.
• Recommendation: Add introductory text in Section 5:
 "This specification inherits all security considerations from RFC 7644 Section 7, with the following additions..."

5.Section 5: Terminology Consistency
• Issue: Inconsistent use of "client" (RFC 7644) vs. "actor" (Section 5.1).
• Recommendation: Replace all "actor" references with "client" in security considerations.

6. Replace "This draft" with "This document" throughout the text.

Thanks,
Bo Wu