Reviewer: Shuping Peng
Review Result: 

I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft.


Summary:
This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that should be considered prior to publication.

Comments:
This draft is well written, and has resolved the comments in the mailing list. Some minor issues and nits are just for your reference since I am not a scim expert. 

Major Issues:
 "No major issues found."

Minor Issues:
1. Section 2.1
" "format" whose value is set to scim ", shall it be " "format" whose value is set to "scim" "?

2. Section 2.1
" Instead of "sub", the top-level claim "sub_id" SHALL be used. "sub_id" contains the subclaim "format" whose value is set to scim to indicate the other attributes present are SCIM attributes. The following sub_id attributes are defined: "

"the other attributes present" mentioned here are "The following sub_id attributes" in the next sentence, right? I just wonder whether "the other sub_id attributes present" would be clearer. 

3. Section 2.4.1
"Note that because the event MAY be used for replication, the final id attribute that was assigned by the SCIM Service Provider is shared so that"

What is the "final id attribute"? 

"The Event Receiver MAY retrieve that information by performing a SCIM GET to the sub value specified."

What is the "sub value"? 

Nits:
1. Section 2
s/, that describe some event that has occurred./, that describes some event that has occurred.

2. Section 2.4.1
s/In notice mode, attributes is/In notice mode, attributes are

3. Section 2.5.1.1
s/(see Section 3,/(see Section 3),