I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-scim-events-10 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2025-09-25 IETF LC End Date: 2025-09-24 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Almost Ready. Sorry to be a little late with this review. It took me rather longer than expected due to unfamiliarity with the plethora of documents in SCIM stable. Most of my comments are at the nit/editorial issue level but there are a number of places where concepts appear without either truly prior definition or pointers to such definition and there are some areas of interaction with the other specifications in the SCIM stable that appear to need clarifying or correcting. Major issues: Minor issues: (This almost rises to the level of a minor issue) s2.2, txn item: I observe that the definitions of the txn and jti claims in Section 2.2 of RFC 8417 reverse the mandatoriness of txn and jti (txn optional and jti mandatory in RFC 8417). If this is fully intended, I think it would be good to emphasise the reversal. To relieve my curiosity, is there a good reason why this has been done assuming this *is* what was intended please? Possibly to do with the advent of the Set-txn HTTP response header? Nits/editorial comments: Global: s/i.e. /i.e., / (1 instance in s1.3). s/e.g. /e.g., / (12 instances) Global: References to Sections in other RFCs are normally expressed in the form Section of [RFC xyzm] - this makes it clearer that they are pointers to other documents as opposed to a local cross-ref plus a RFC with a missing comma/ Abstract/s1: Expand SCIM on first use (it isn't in the RFC Editor well known category) and refer to RFC 7642 which is the base specification for the SCIM story. s1, 1st sentence: The SET spec specifies a format for the events. Suggest s/as specified by/in the format defined by/ s1, para 4: I think it would be helpful to introduce the concept of Event Streams/Event Feeds here. Currently they appear in s1.3 without any previous connection and the word 'quality' is used there which I found very confusing. OLD: Security Event Tokens [RFC8417] and SCIM Events offer the ability to exchange messages that act as triggers for receivers to monitor over time in an asynchronous approach. This enables greater scale and timeliness, where only changed information is exchanged between parties. NEW: Security Event Tokens [RFC8417] and SCIM Events offer the ability to exchange messages that act as triggers for receivers to monitor changes to resources over time in an asynchronous approach. This enables greater scale and timeliness, where only changed information is exchanged between parties. The messages would be exchanged over Event Feeds (also known as Event Streams) linking SCIM clients and SCIM service providers. s1, para 5: I found this phrase slightly confusing - I initially read it as the event being delivered to the SCIM Client: s/delivered asynchronously to the originating SCIM Client/delivered asynchronously relative to the event in the originating SCIM Client/ s1, para 5, last word: s/domain/domains/ s1, para 6: s/defined/that are defined/ (it is the extra attributes that are defined in s3, not ...ServiceProviderConfig). s1.3: The following text appears to have duplicate discussions of the common meaning of claims and attributes - it needs tidying up. > In JSON Web Tokens and Security Event Tokens, the term "claim" refers > to JSON attribute values in a JSON Web Token [RFC7519] structure. > The term "claim" in tokens is used to indicate that an attribute > value may not be verified and its accuracy can be questioned. In the > context of SCIM, claims are referred to as attributes. For the > purposes of this specification claims and attributes are inter- > changeable. For consistency, JWT and SET IANA registered attributes > will continue to be called claims, while event attributes (i.e. those > in an event payload) will be referred to as attributes. > > Additionally, the following terms are defined: > > Attributes and Claims > The JWT specification [RFC7519] upon which SET is based uses the > term "claims" to refer to attributes in a JSON token. SCIM in > contrast uses the term "attributes" to refer to JSON attributes. > For the purposes of this draft, the terms "attributes" and > "claims" are equivalent. s1.3, CP discussion: I think this should mention 'notice mode' with a pointer to Section 2.4.1 where this mode is defined. s1.3, DBR discussion: Add a pointer to Section 2.4.1 where 'full mode' is defined. s1.3, Event Feed discussion: s/aka/equivalently/. I suggest the following alternative first sentence (I know what you mean by 'quality' but it takes some thinking about!): An Event Feed (equivalently Event Stream) is a logical connection between an Event Publisher and a client implementing the possibility that notification of resource state changes MAY be managed per receiving client. s1.3, SCIM Client discussion: Possibly add 'via one or more Event Feeds'? s2.1, uri item: A reference to Section 3.2 of RFC 7644 for the definition of resource type endpoint would help. s2.1, para 1, last sentence: Is this the 'Subject Identification' constraint in s3? Might be worth saying as there are several sub discussions in RFC 8417. s2.1, externalId and id items: Presumably these attributes share definitions with the same items in RFC 7463 Section 3.1. If so a reference would help. s2,1, "emails, username..." item: Are the allowed values here constrained to those defined in Section 4.1 of RFC 7463? Whether or not this is the case should be stated here. s2.2, data item: s/SCIM Bulk/the SCIM Bulk/ s2.2, txn item: s/is a SET defined claim/txn is a SET defined claim/ It may be worth mentioning that it has a STRING value. s2.2, txn item: I observe that the definitions of the txn and jti claims in Section 2.2 of RFC 8417 reverse the mandatoriness of txn and jti (txn optional and jti mandatory in RFC 8417). If this is fully intended, I think it would be good to emphasise the reversal. To relieve my curiosity, is there a good reason why this has been done assuming this *is* what was intended please? Possibly to do with the advent of the Set-txn HTTP response header? s2.2, 'attributes' item: I don't understand why the second sentence (starting "Values of...") is relevant (or correct here). The item appears to be an array of claim names. To clarify this s/array of attributes/array of names of attributes/ in any case. If the second sentence is in fact appropriate, then I think some explanation is needed and also s/path>/path/ - otherwise it should be deleted as the list of attribute names does not have any interest in the format of the individual claim values. s2.4.1, 3rd sentence: "final state" - Surely the set of values represents the 'current' set of values at the time the event occurred/was reported? Suggest s/final state/current state/ s2.4.1, 4th sentence: add '(see Figure 4)' for consistency with notice mode. s2.4.1, Figure 4 title: s/Example SCIM Create (Full)/Example SCIM Create Event (Full)/ (for consistency with Figure 5.) s2.4.1, last para: s/The event above/The example event shown in Figure 5/ (Both Figure 4 and Figure 5 are above). s2.4.3 and s2.4.4: It may be a bit nit picking but it would be good to indicate explicitly which figures are referred to in the introductory text of these two sections as in Section 2.4.2. s2.4.6, "minimal disclosure requirements": Firstly Section 2.4.5 says nothing explicitly about disclosure events. Secondly, what is meant by a disclosure event? There is no definition of this term. s2.5.1.1, para 2 and also in s3, None : For consistency with the title of Section 2.5.1 s/async SCIM request/asynchronous SCIM request/ s2.5.1.1, respond-async: This is defined in RFC 7240 (along with the Prefer header) and not RFC 9110. s2.5.1.1, respond-async: RFC 7240 provides the 'wait' preference allowing the server to decide whether to respond synchronously or asynchronously depending on expected response delay. Should this be honoured or MUST the server ignore the wait preference in SCIM cases as it is allowed to do? s2.5.1.1, Servicing of asynchronous requests by proxies: Does anything need to be said about this for the SCIM case? s2.5.1.1, Set-txn header (para after Figure 12): The specification needs an explicit definition of the Set-txn HTTP header. It appears here without any definition. This definition needs to be referenced in Section 6.1. s2.5.1.3, 2nd sentence: s/is the same a single/is the same as a single/ Appendix C: Should contain an RFC Editor note requesting the deletion of Appendix C before publication. Appendix D: Acknowledgements and authors addresses are normally sections in the body of the document.