I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08 Reviewer: Miguel Garcia Review Date: 2013-01-05 IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-10 IESG Telechat date: 2013-01-10 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP. Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: - Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: GGSN (used in Figure 2), PDP (used in Figure 2, but not expanded until Section 7.2 later), ISP, 3GPP, GSM, and UMTS. /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain