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Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis-03
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 30 August 2013
IETF LC End Date: 2 September 2013
IESG Telechat date: 12 September 2013

Summary: Ready with nits.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits:

In 1.1

This document complements the IPv6 node requirements [RFC6434] in
   places where clarifications are needed the with discussion on the use

Delete "the" before "with"?

   of these selected IPv6 specifications when operating over a cellular
   interface.

In 2.2:

RTP and SIP need Informative references.

In 2.4:

PPP needs an Informative reference.

Also, where is IPv6CP defined?


Appendix B.  Changes to RFC 3316



I think that before publication this section needs to be reworked a bit 


to have a single list of changes, referencing particular draft versions 


is not going to be very useful in the final RFC.