I am reviewing this Internet-Draft as part of the secdir Last Call assignments.

The subject is outside my area of expertise, but I have feedback on how understandable the content is.


Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext-36
Reviewer: Akira Tsukamoto
Review Date: 2026-07-28
Intended Status: Standards Track


Nits/editorial comments:


1. Section 5

Missing space in
"...as specified in Section 5.2 of[RFC9552]."
should be
"...as specified in Section 5.2 of [RFC9552]."


2. Section 5

The
"...(refer section 5.2.2 of [RFC9552])..."
should be
"...(refer to section 5.2.2 of [RFC9552])..."


3. Section 10, Security Considerations

“As such, operators SHOULD handle this critical information in a manner that restricts it to the walled garden.”
should be 
“As such, operators SHOULD handle this critical information in a manner that restricts it to the walled garden or filtering it before it leaves the walled garden.”


Akira