Document: draft-ietf-spice-glue-id
Title: YANG Data Model for Scheduled Attributes
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review result: Has Issue

This draft creates a GLobal Unique Enterprise (GLUE) URN namespace, registers it with IANA, and makes some initial Authority Identifier registrations within that namespace. The document is simply written, and I did not find any security concerns with it. Aside from a couple of nits, I have one issue that’s only marginally worth considering around the DE criteria.

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

Page 7, last paragraph: what’s the definition of “sense” at the end of this sentence? That’s awfully vague.

Nits:

Page 3, section 1, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: change “a myriad of” to “myriad”. Alternatively, change “are a myriad” to “is a myriad”. 

Page 5, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: as a purely aesthetic choice, consider swapping the order of ‘period (“.”)’ and ‘hyphen (“-“)’ in the sentence to match the ABNF. The same applies for the following paragraph on External Identifiers. Utterly inconsequential, I know.