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Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-claton-12

Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2025-11-14
IETF LC End Date: 2025-11-21
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Essentially ready for publication as a proposed standard RFC, but with nits to consider before publication.

Nits/editorial comments:

Please seriously consider removing the appendix. The disclaimers about the diagram not being comprehensive will be ignored, and it will get implemented exactly as drawn.

The second paragraph of page 12 is one very long sentence, and it parses badly. Please break it into a few simple sentences.